As smoke climbed higher into the sky, the ground started rumbling. Sirens went off. We gathered
everything that we had packed for when the sirens went off ,into the back of our van. Photo albums,
ornaments, old pictures of relatives, clothes, food, cups, bowls and nana. As we zoomed down the
highway, it all began. The volcano erupted and dad pushed his foot flat on the accelerator. We flew
over the hills in the country and made it to grandads house in the safe zone. Grandad helped us out
of the car, we got out very shaken up but safe.
everything that we had packed for when the sirens went off ,into the back of our van. Photo albums,
ornaments, old pictures of relatives, clothes, food, cups, bowls and nana. As we zoomed down the
highway, it all began. The volcano erupted and dad pushed his foot flat on the accelerator. We flew
over the hills in the country and made it to grandads house in the safe zone. Grandad helped us out
of the car, we got out very shaken up but safe.
I really like your descriptions and it gave a sense of urgency. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
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